Critique Please!

[Zumie05]

Hello everyone,

Today I made a how-to instructional video for grooming longer haired cats and dogs. I based it off my personally known techniques and opinions, and I would love to get feedback such as...are there any parts I should take out, sections I should consider adding in, does it need music at any time, incorrect information I may have provided, etc.

I made this because I get a lot of people that ask me how to do these sorts of things, so I thought a movie would be nice to direct people to.

*warning - this movie is half an hour long, watch it all if you like, but I did make links at the beginning to jump from one section to the other*

Here it is!




Thanks in advance.